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Location: PERTH / AUSTRALIA
Job: STUDENT
Yesterday is time killed
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33 Reviews | 4 w/ Responses
it was ok, you need to fix up the animation tohugh, it's not solid enouggh. have a thicker line for the outline so i can see whats going on easier
Author's Response:
thanks, yeah I hear you on the thicker outlines
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What a crazy bastard lol, nice work!
Author's Response:
thx.
bro.
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it was cool, i liked it!
Author's Response:
cool
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this flash was smooth and effective. I love this style of flash, the stick battle thing and this one was a great example of how great they can be. WELL DONE!
If i had to make a suggestion on how to improve i would say, even though stick wars are fun, you should at least create a storyline to follow. Every individual scene was put together very well but a story line, maybe a hero in search of revenge creating a bloody path where he walks, is really needed in any flash.
If you can't think of a story line, use history for inspiration, recreate ww2 stick style or something like that.
Adding a storyline would definately set this apart from many other great stick flicks.
But still, this was a great flash. Well done, kep up the stickamation LOL!
Author's Response:
Point taken. We will try to figure something out.
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