Nah I dunno...
Sounded better when you blended that annoying sound together, but I think it's a tad to slow and that intro loop sounds like a sound bite from some where I know I've heard it. The Arps and what not that came in after 1 minute ruined the song as they were a completely different feel and style. Not liking it but it shows potential definitely. Not minimalistic at all either. The main beat is nice and side chained perfectly good job on that. If you cut our your intro and just had the main beat it would get a nine.
I think you should use that blended sound as a lead in your next song